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Reader POV~

“_______(Name) It’s time to wake up. I have some…news.”

You slowly wake up to Arthur’s voice. You sit up and rub your eyes. He’s in your bedroom! You blush seeing him. You are only in a nightgown!!

“A-Arthur?! What are you doing here?”

I see a blush on his face as well.

“T-There is no time to waist. Clan leader, Allistor, has announced a ball for all noble vampires. He wishes for you to join him as his special guest. He is really excited to finally met you…”

“A ball?! I-I’ve never been to a ball! W-Why do you look down?”

“W-Well…I never actually….”

He sighs.

“I never told him that you where human…”

Your eyes widen in shock.

“W-What?! Won’t they all kill me!?”

He shakes his head fast.

“No. Vampire or not you are the artist, who makes the artwork he loves. He would never kill you. He will protect you against the other nobles. It will just be a surprise. If it makes you feel any better, I will be there too. I will not let any harm come to you, love.”

You nod, feeling better that Arthur will be there. He smiles.

“We have four days to educate you in the manners, dancing, and clothes of a noble ball. Are you ready?”

A real ball!! You’ve e never been in a real ball before let alone be trained for one! And Arthur will be there…in a suit. Your heart beats faster at the idea and you can tell he hears the difference in you heart beat.

He tilts his head, “Are you okay?”

You nod yes, “Of course! I’m just really excited about it! I’ve never been invited to a party let alone a ball!”

He looks surprised. “You’ve never been to a party? I can’t believe a beautiful women like yourself hasn’t been to tons of parties.”

“W-Well…I’m not very social…I spend my time drawing instead. I love my art.”

“Well, ______(Name) I will have you fit for the ball an I guarantee you will have an amazing night.”

For the next four days you learn how to act at a ball. Lukas teaches you manners. He is very well behaved and teaches you how to act properly at a ball. He teaches you how to place silverware, how to hold your drinks, how to make small talk, and how to walk. You decided that you like Lukas. He’s calm and quiet but smart and opinionated. Andrei taught you more about vampires. He taught you how they talk, their social network, how each vampire is born with same level of powers but they have one think they are more powerful in like fire as an example, and each clans ranking in power, ect. And Arthur taught you how to dance. It was amazing dancing with him. You stepped on his feet a couple of times, but he’d just laugh, smile, and encourage you to keep trying. By the end of the lessons you were dancing pretty well, not perfect but still good. You loved looking at him, while you danced. He looked like the perfect gentleman and it made you blush. It’s the night of the ball and Arthur said he has the perfect outfit for you.

“What is the dress?”

He smiles, “It is perfect for you! I made it myself.”

“Y-You made it?! You can do that? Wow! You’re talented!!”

You see him blush a little, “You don’t think it’s not…a wussy thing to do?”

You shade your head ‘no’; “It’s really sweet that you would make something for me.”

Crap! Now, you’re blushing too!

“Well, close your eyes.”

You close your eyes, excited! What would the dress look like? Will you like it?

“Okay, open your eyes, now.”

In front of you is a red dress with a black belt with diamonds across it. It has a ruffled chest piece with a ruby heart shape in the cleavage with a one strap over the right shoulder, leaving the left shoulder bare.

“I-It’s the most beautiful dress I’ve ever seen.”

“I choose red because…well, vampires are naturally attracted to the color red.”

You smile excitedly, “I’ll try it on, right now! So, get out. I’ll do my makeup and then show all three of you in the living room.”

He leaves and you change into the dress and then do your make up.

You walks down the hallways, which you have a good understanding of now, to the main living room. You open the doors to see Arthur, Lukas, and Andrei all in suits talking on the cough.


They all turn to look at me and stand up. They all seem frozen except for Lukas. He walks up to me with a smile on his face.

“You look amazing, ______(Name). Just remember all the manners I taught you and you will do fine.”

I nod and do a curtsy for affect.

“Thank you very much, kind sir.”


I look up to see Andrei and Arthur walk up to me. Andrei has a smug look on his face and Arthur’s blushing.

“________(Name) you look absolutely stunningly beautiful.”

I blush back at Arthur.

“I….I really do?”

He seems to be at a loss for words and just nods.

Andrei chuckles, “That red will defiantly attract lots of vampires.”

“That’s a good thing?”

Lukas smiles, “Yes, it is.”

Vampire!Arthur POV~

The moment I saw her in that dress, I felt my heart beat faster. She was stunning. That red…oh my gosh that red!! I could feel my fangs start to elongate and I have to mentally force them back in. That heart on her cleavage…I felt my face flush. She was just beautiful.

I’m so mad that my damn brother is her ‘date.’ I want to be by her side, but it’ll all be over after this ball. We will go back to getting to know each other and hanging out. Then all make a ball for just us two.

I shake my head to come back to reality.

Reader POV~

I see him shake his head.

“Ready to meet sir Allistor, ________(Name).”

He reaches out his arm for me to take and I wrap my arm around his and follow him to the other side of the castle. Lukas and Andrei follow behind us. Finally, we come to a hug door and Lukas and Andrei open it for us.

My mouth drops.

The ballroom is full of beautiful vampires in extravagant dresses, dancing. The room is full off gold and red everywhere. A huge crystal chandelier hangs in the middle of the ballroom. The tile is gold with a pattern of red that flows like water together. The walls are in the same pattern. On the far right side of the huge room is a stage with a marvelous throne and a man in a gold and red suit sits on it. Lukas and Andrei branch off to their own dates as Arthur leads you to the man on the throne, who you assume is Allistor. We step onto the stage and Arthur bows respectfully. You copy his movements the best you can. It’s dead quiet and you can feel all the eyes on you and Allistor stands up.

“Arthur, you never told me ________(Name) was a human.”

“I didn’t think it mattered what she was as long as you like her artwork.”

“Yes…well, it doesn’t matter. She is still my guest. All vampires are forbidden to touch her.”

He looks out and all the guests bow in acknowledgment.

“A ball is still a ball. Lets have a good time. ________(Name) is my honored guest and will spend the ball with me. Arthur you are dismissed.”

Arthur bows and walks off the stage.

“Come with me _______(Name) lets dance.”

“Y-Yes, sir.”

You grab Allistor’s hand and dance with him on the dance floor.

“I am in love with your art. I have bought your art for a long time. However, when I saw your latest artwork of the place I live…I was blown away more than ever before. You’re artwork has stolen my heart.”

You can’t help but to blush.

“T-Thank you so much. No one has ever complemented my artwork to that degree.”

“I appreciate artwork.”

For the next few hours you and Allistor talk about art. You find out that Allistor is extremely knowledgeable in art and that Allistor and you have the same likes, dislikes, and tastes in art. You have a fun time with Allistor, but you always look for Arthur. You see him dance with some beautiful vampire women. You feel jealous, but at the same time you have fun with Allistor. It was just a ball, though. After this is over, everything will go back to the way it was. You probably won’t even see Allistor again. The ball is, finally, ending.

“This was wonderful, Allistor. Thank you for the wonderful dances.”

“Thank you. Now, that I have talked to you I feel better than ever before. You being a human has hindered my plan, but not much. The only thing I desire more than art is an artist vampire queen to rule by my side.”

Allistor gets in his knees an pulls out a huge diamond ring with a red band.

“So, ________(Name) will you let me turn you into a vampire and become my queen and my wife.”

You are completely shocked. The only thing you notice more than your racing heart is Arthur’s shocked and heart-broken face among the crowd, watching.
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Chapter 1:
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Chapter 3:…
Chapter 4:…
Chapter 5:…
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It is an ordinary day, and you are just about to finish a drawing of the ocean. You are a little worried because your deadline is coming up. You still can’t believe that you are a professional artist. It has always been your dream, and you always have had a love for art.  You smi
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KeiraFangirl Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
This can't be it! I want to know what happens next! PLEASE! I'M LITERALLY ON MY KNEES!
AngelinaThePsycho Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
cutekittycat345 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015  Student Artist
Plz continue 
Catherine-Embrace Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Your story is really good!
Please continue!
Sakurai-Aiko Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you going to continue this story...?
It is a getting really interesting...

Please Continue
FaaR0uT Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Oh men ,,, its been like forever.. i wonder will you eve continue this master piece
animelover9890 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015
Ah...I have no idea what to say to that....It's a yes or no question but I don't want to hurt anyone's feeling DX 
Ceylon-Morphe286 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This is my reaction,
Me: "bitch fuck no! I barely even know you!all I know is you have the same likes and dislikes as me and that's a little creepy! So get that ugly ass diamond ring out of my face and get your ass away from me!"
*stomps over to authur*
Me: " also,authur is more of a gentleman than you will ever be!"
SweateredTriggerer Featured By Owner May 16, 2015  Student General Artist
I...I...I...Please update this...
Gunter-The-Mermaid Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Well shit. Reader-chan was caught on the worst decision ever: Accept or deny?
Aemham Featured By Owner May 13, 2015
I......... must see (Well, read) what happens next....
Miukumaukuzz Featured By Owner May 11, 2015
It would be perfect if there would be two endings - one where you say yes and get Allistor and one where you say no and get Arthur. :3
john3167 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
yea! thats a really good idea she should do that! :D
SunnyBrightSky Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
What will happen next!? Omg this is amazing and well written! I would really love to see more of it!
NarukoOkumara Featured By Owner Edited Jan 10, 2015  Student Artist
I don't know what to say if I say no I'll probably die but if I say yes i won't ever be happy (live or be happy.....)
thezoetheory Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Please update!!
SpiderNinja24 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Poor Arthur...
tanjaaaa Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
noooo, why must there be a cliffhanger????? so cruel..... 
 i love your story, hope you update soon :)
cancerleovirgo Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
................(shit what do i say???!!!!)
Yuki-sama12 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
shiiiiiitttttttttt! That's what i'm thinking and saying as i'm reading this.
Superdaughter2 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014
Bear hug!!!! Wow my favorite color is red. Are you a designer for dresses if not you should try it. I can imagine the dress very clear because you describe it awesome! Please write more and you are awesome author. I like your writing and I like how it end at each chapter
23rd-earl Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Hobbyist
AwesomeAnnieJones Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
Next chapterrrr!!
LuVamp Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014
OMG, what happen  next?
jess-the-killer-girl Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Student Artist
My face is just like .0. cat face((-> me doing that to allistor, ahah just playing)) APH Prussia tackle hug 
Allistor:will you let me turn you into a vampire and become my queen and my wife.
me:Turn me into a vampire, yes, be your wife and queen no, i love someone else and don't you think you preposed to fast i mean i only just met you a couple mins ago.
Me:.//looks at Arthur and mouths happily ' your my only love' //
Arthur: ^////^ 
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RikaKuroyuki Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
NOOOOO!!!! I want Arthur and not that damn Allistair.... next chapter please!!!! PLEASE!!!! *begs* Racing Girl Emoji (Please forgive me) [V3] :begging: 
Ladybugg042602 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 30, 2014
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LizzieFlower Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Student General Artist
As a red head with ancestors from Scotland I take offense to that. Lol jokes.
Parissimmons Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014
Oh dear lord you scared me for a sec there ^__^" truly im sorry
LizzieFlower Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Student General Artist
lol it's okay
breezyblossom Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Just go with Alfred, the vampire hunter hero!!! XD
Kawaiiluka123 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014
Is there anymore? Because I loving this so much
hetaliaireland15 Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
i want to know what happends next X<
AmaraTheHedgehog Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow this is really good! Arthur looks so sad but I would marry Allistor if he asked. Numerous reasons why but you made it so Allistor woulf be a perfect match for her than again Arthur befriended her and she knows him more. Allistor would be my choice though...
ParaTheImp Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
More please! *spins widely on the floor* Please~! The suspense is killing everyone~!
RoseEmma1 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014,non,Nyet,nej,anii,Iieh, Nein!!!!
I want my Brit!! (Not that I don't like you Allister...even if I don't really know much about you)

I require more Please!! :D
Yasmeeeen Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
omg....omg what happen next more please
layla-mindora Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nooooooooooooooooo! I don't want to merry him!
but awsome story
Littlemisspagan Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
ElegantBlossom Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist
TT-TT the suspense is killing meee
FairyFudge07 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NUH UH. YOU JUST LEFT A CLIFFHANGERR!!!! NOOOOO!!! Oh my, I just love this so much~ You are an awesome writer!
ShadiceMaple Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my goodness...this story is really well written, and I love the plot line of it!! Gah, I can't wait for more!!
AdoptMafia Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Artist
Has anyone payed yet? I dont think I have enough to do it myself, I could help though
Artistmema123 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student General Artist
its been a year MOARMOARMOARMOAR
hetaliadreamer Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student General Artist
.............................................................. my hand mind and throat is spazzing out with the feels i dont know whats to say think or type ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh xx
hetaliadreamer Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Student General Artist
if reader-chan says the wrong thing she could either die of embarrassment or you know ..... shes at a ball for vampires for goodness sake xx
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