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Tears

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The wind blows through me.
Through my hollow soul and back
with tears of sorrow.

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Ok so I imaged a girl with long hair that the wind is blowing behind her, and the wind changes. A gust goes through her heart and when it continues out the other side she starts to cry. She feels alone, sad, depressed, unloved, bullied, hurt (maybe abused?), but she hides it from everyone. That's why she feels her soul is hollow all the pain and bullying she just lets go and acts fine, but she really is hurt. But the wind pushed her emotionally to let her tears flow. I haven't done haiku's in a long time, so i was excited when i wrote this! This is a Japanese Haiku with 5 syllables 7 then 5.
This is my entry for :iconanddeeperyet: group contest about short poems about depression.
PLEASE COMMENT! All thoughts are appreciated!
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iClubBabySeals's avatar
That was a beautiful haiku.