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Piwy (OC) X Rei: The Rush Of The Water (Commish)

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Piwy (OC) POV~
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It’s another day of school.  It’s been about two weeks since my parents and I moved back from Australia. I was so excited to be back home! But…my first day off school didn’t go so well. On my way into the classroom, I tripped and fell on my face. I’m clumsy by nature and the entire class laughed. After classes were over, I was just walking, and I passed the track teams practice. That is where I saw him, Rei, my dream boyfriend. The way his blue hair swished in the wind and his sweat falling onto his glasses made me want to squeal and Fangirl, which I did as soon as I got home. I told Gou, my best friend, and we both fangirled together. Today is the day I get the courage to talk to Rei. I’ve been planning this for so long. I go through the school day and when the bell rings, jump up and rush to the track team. I watch the track team, but I don’t see Rei. I go up to one of his teammates.

“Ummmm…hello. Do you know where Rei is?”

The guy smiles brightly at me, “Rei? Oh, he joined the swimming team. He’s at practice right, now.”

Swimming? My face blushes at the thought of seeing him in only swimming trunks. I nod.

“Thank you!!”

I rush out and run to the swimming pool. I hear a splash and run even faster. I see Haruka swimming in the pool, practicing. Rei is on the side only in his swim trunks. He has his glasses on and his tapping his glasses frame, thinking deep in thought. Taking a deep breath, I skip up to him.

“H-Hey….umm…..Hello. My name is Piwy……”

“If I dive in at an angle of 480 and out stretch my arms at an angle of 250, I should end up at a speed of 5MPH in the water……and then if I….”

Rei doesn’t here me. He is in a deep calculation, which is so cute!! Rei is always so smart!! That’s one of the reasons I like him!! I speak up.

“My name is PIWY!!”

“Huh?”

He turns around shocked to see me there, which makes me more nervous.

“Piwy? What a peculiar name.”

I blush and nod.

“It is a great h-honor to meet you, Rei-sama!! I have been admiring you since the first day off school…w-would you please except this?”

I hand out a box of homemade chocolate as a show of my confession. I am blushing madly and I can feel my heart beating super fast.  I close my eyes waiting for his response.

“Chocolate? That is known to be bad for your health. Besides, I have no time to deal with a girlfriend at the moment. I have to calculate how to swim in top speed to help my time win the upcoming tournament.”

He turns back around and heads to the pool, going to dive in. My heart sinks to the bottom of the pool. I was rejected….REJECTED!! I feel tears come to my eyes as water splashes me from Rei’s dive. I watch him swim. He’s…horrible. He sinks straight to the bottom and then claws his way back up to the surface. His Butterfly stroke is not uniformed and he looks like he’s having a spasm. He is a horrible swimmer…but he is still amazing. I run home crying and fall into Gou’s arms.

“He rejected me, Gou!! He…r-rejected m-me….and he joined the swimming team!! But, He can’t swim, Gou!! I mean AT ALL!! But…I still like him, Gou!! I like him a lot!!”

I cry in Gou’s arms and Gou pats my back.

“Shhhh…shhh…it’s okay, Piwy. Give him some time…I’m sure he will come too. He is very calculative. Let him get used to the idea of a girlfriend. I’m sure there will be a moment that he realizes how amazing you are.”

*Time skip to two weeks*

It’s been two weeks since I confessed and was rejected by Rei. Ever since then I have been helping the manager of the swimming club, which gives me more time with Rei. Plus, seeing him bare chested and soaking wet is not a bad sight. HeHe. >////< I have been very clumsy. I have fallen, dropped towels, and dropped drinks, but I have been dedicated to have Rei like me. Though he seems completely involved and determined to calculate the best way to swim. I love how smart he is, but he needs to relax. It is the day of the big tournament. I am running a little late, but I still make it on time, panting. Makoto walks up to me smiling like always.

“Cutting it a little close, Piwy?”

I nod.

“Y-Yes!! I fell this morning…”

He giggles and notices my long socks.

“Why do you always wear those? You know Rei will just complain about your socks. He always says they are ‘impractical and cover up the legs, which are one of the woman’s best features.’”

I huff and cross my arms in child like defiance.

“I like them no matter what Rei says. They are cute!”

Makoto giggles and says his goodbye, going to get some more towels. I see Nagisa running toward me.

“Piwy!! Hurry!! Haruka and Rin, his archrival, are arguing!! Rei is just watching won’t do anything. He says that he is ‘studying the psychological developments of rivals’ or something!! Hurry, Piwry!!”

Rin? It couldn’t be…I run with Haruka and see the argument. I run up and star wide-eyed.

“R-Rin Matsuoka? I haven’t seen you in forever!!!!”

I run up and end up tripping into his arms. I looks up at his face giggling. He looks stunned.

“Piwy?! What are you doing here?!”

Haruka looks confused.

“You two know each other?”

I nod frantically and smile.

“We lived in the same town in Australia!! I’ve been meaning to see him, but he’s always so busy training in that fancy swimming school!!”

“Hey!! I’ve been training my butt off to beat this joker.”

He points to Haruka, and I can’t help but to laugh.

“Well, good look to both of you two!!”

Rin smiles at me and pats my head, teasing me by kissing on my cheek, which makes me blush.

“See you in the water, Haruka!! Piwy, you won’t be with these guys long because of embarrassment of hanging out with LOSERS!! HaHa!!”

I smile and laugh to.

Rei Ryūgazaki POV~
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I was analyzing the fight between the two swimming rivals, when Piwy runs over. She has been helping manage the swim team for a while. She never seemed to give up after I turned her down. In all my calculations, I have never understood a woman’s mind or why she insists on wearing those awful socks. Nevertheless, when I saw her face light up and hug Rin, I felt…weird. Interesting, I have been through many human emotions and have found rational reasons for all of them. This emotion is jealousy? But, why am I jealous of Rin? If they are friends so what? I will have to work on this problem before finding a probable solution. While, I am still pondering this new problem, Piwy comes up to me.

“Good luck Rei!! I will be cheering for you!!”

Hm. That made the emotion of happiness comes out. Very interesting. The only variable between the two circumstances is Piwy. Somehow she is causing these things. I slightly smile back.

“Thank you. I will only swim as fast as the angle of theta will allow my arms to stretch.”

She laughs at me like the simple explanation amuses her.

“Well, still, good luck!!”

She smiles and waves goodbye, tripping over a chair. She is always clumsy.  Why, do I keep thinking that is cute? I shake my head and return to the diving area adjusting the angle of my body to fit the perfect way to dive into the pool.

“On your mark. Get set. GO!!!!”

I dive into the water and as I start to sink, like I always do despite my calculations, I use my legs to kick me to the surface. I take a deep breath of air and start my butterfly stroke, significantly behind the other swimmers. Despite all my calculations my arms spasm in the water and I move slowly.

“WOOO HOOO!!!! GO REI!!!! YOU CAN DO IT!!! I BELIVE IN YOU!!!!! YAAAAY REI!!!!”

Despite the water and the adrenaline of the race, my time seems to stop. I look at the water through my glasses and all I can hear is Piwy’s voice. My heart starts beating abnormally fast. I feel like my body is on fire!! Piwy encourages me despite how bad and hopelessly I swim despite all my hard practices and calculations. Why am I just now noticing her clumsy and cheerful words full of joy all directed toward me? What is this? I have spend years discovering all the emotions a human may encounter and the specific situations that bring them out, but this I have NEVER felt before!! I try to use all my intelligence to go through all psychology and mathematics that I know to discover what this feeling is, but I can’t find an answer!! I, Rei Ryugazaki, cannot answer a problem!! This has never happened in my life!! As I feel the water of the pool hit my face and my lungs gasp for O2 (Oxygen), I realize that this is one question I cannot answer: What is this feeling I have for Piwy? Somehow deep in my logical based mind a illogical possible answer shows itself.

Could it be love?!  

The End~
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