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"Love You"
Is what I wanted us to say
every time we parted ways.
So if you died, the last thing you'd hear me say
would be "Love You."
Now those words float in the air like wind
going nowhere.
Every time we say our goodbyes,
Those words come out,
and fly by.
Love ~~~You~~~
They are just words.
Letters dancing around to make sounds.
They mean nothing to you.
They mean nothing to me.
Maybe…
Maybe if I hadn't insisted on us saying those words so much.
Maybe if we only had said goodbye.
Maybe then the words would not be a lie.
Right now they are just a gust of wind
blowing through my heart.
Love ~~~You~~~
Lets Stop!
No more "Love you"!
Cause maybe…
Just maybe…
If we stop speaking those words,
Then maybe they might one day have meaning again
Love You?
Is what I wanted us to say
every time we parted ways.
So if you died, the last thing you'd hear me say
would be "Love You."
Now those words float in the air like wind
going nowhere.
Every time we say our goodbyes,
Those words come out,
and fly by.
Love ~~~You~~~
They are just words.
Letters dancing around to make sounds.
They mean nothing to you.
They mean nothing to me.
Maybe…
Maybe if I hadn't insisted on us saying those words so much.
Maybe if we only had said goodbye.
Maybe then the words would not be a lie.
Right now they are just a gust of wind
blowing through my heart.
Love ~~~You~~~
Lets Stop!
No more "Love you"!
Cause maybe…
Just maybe…
If we stop speaking those words,
Then maybe they might one day have meaning again
Love You?
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I'm sooo sorry I haven't posted any new poetry in so long 
! Here's my newest poem. Hope you like it!
The "~~~" are supposed to show the words floating/flying in the wind.
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(I do NOT own these stamps)
! Here's my newest poem. Hope you like it!The "~~~" are supposed to show the words floating/flying in the wind.
Please Comment (I do NOT own these stamps)
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Originality Technique Impacthmm.... I could tell that this poem had much emotion put into it. Love is definitely a difficult word that is hard to comprehend. The description you put into love like it was a physical object was good. Your style of writing is pretty straightforward and clean. Although it was overall a good poem, I felt as if it was missing something... I can't exactly put my finger on it though. It seemed like you left many words unsaid.
The impact was definitely there. It hit me hard since I can relate to it. You have definitely got the gears in my head turning.